Oekaki@Heyuri

looks fine to me ┐(ﾟ～ﾟ)┌
the only thing that looks slightly off is the hands
a little too big and her hand should be a little flatter if it's touching a surface, i think?

ah! i think the legs lack a little depth!
the face and body have some nice perspective, but the legs look flat to me.. as for how to fix it.. i think it's just making the right leg a touch larger... right? maybe give the foot some more depth too?
i dunno! i'm not a good artist (;´Д`)

Honestly I think this is really cute anon! If I were to nitpick, I'd go for the hand. It seems large, but I dunno.. It could be chalked up to style too. If you're worried about the legs maybe add a bit more detail to it by putting more lines to show more definition? I'm not a good artist but I think your art is really cute and even your critique of the legs looking "flat" makes it look more soft and cute ( ´ ꒳ ` ) ♡

thank you everyone for your help! ill try to work on it, im not that great at drawing.,, (;ﾟ∀ﾟ)