[6549] Untitled
Anonymous : 2025/12/07(Sun) 05:56
[6550] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/07(Sun) 06:19
looks fine to me ┐(ﾟ～ﾟ)┌
the only thing that looks slightly off is the hands
a little too big and her hand should be a little flatter if it's touching a surface, i think?
[6551] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/07(Sun) 07:59
ah! i think the legs lack a little depth!
the face and body have some nice perspective, but the legs look flat to me.. as for how to fix it.. i think it's just making the right leg a touch larger... right? maybe give the foot some more depth too?
i dunno! i'm not a good artist (;´Д`)
[6552] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/07(Sun) 12:41
Honestly I think this is really cute anon! If I were to nitpick, I'd go for the hand. It seems large, but I dunno.. It could be chalked up to style too. If you're worried about the legs maybe add a bit more detail to it by putting more lines to show more definition? I'm not a good artist but I think your art is really cute and even your critique of the legs looking "flat" makes it look more soft and cute ( ´ ꒳ ` ) ♡
[6555] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/07(Sun) 13:43
thank you everyone for your help! ill try to work on it, im not that great at drawing.,, (;ﾟ∀ﾟ)
[6582] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/11(Thu) 18:48
It looks good to me but id say the silhouette is a little stiff in my opinion, maybe make the right leg bigger and separate the visible arm from the body, try to rotate it a bit to make it more dynamic
[6583] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/11(Thu) 20:10
i dont know if u can move ur drawings on oekaki…if u can i haven’t figured out how to yet…
[6584] Re: Untitled : Anonymous : 2025/12/11(Thu) 21:53
the legs and especially the arm look a bit too thick and the torso is a wee bit too long, but don't worry too much about it or you'll end up overcorrecting. The drawing is really really cute anyway, if you want to get better as in more faithful to manga yotsuba or more "anatomically" accurate you just have to keep drawing
I realize this is a very common thing to tell artists, but continuously practicing does make you better ъ( ﾟｰ^)
be honest,,whats wrong with my drawings and how do i fix it ?(;´Д`)