[2450] critique this drawing

Anonymous : 2024/05/29(Wed) 16:56


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critique this drawing by Anonymous

can you guys give me advice for what to improve on in my art?


[2451] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/29(Wed) 17:15

Maybe some shading!


[2452] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/29(Wed) 17:23

bigger tits.


[2453] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/29(Wed) 17:39

Less clothing! ヽ(´∇`)ノ


[2454] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/29(Wed) 18:08

I dunno. It's honestly pretty damn good!


[2455] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/30(Thu) 00:05

I agree with shading, would look really nice with it. Otherwise I liek it! (・ω・)b


[2456] Re: critique this drawing : Anonymous : 2024/05/30(Thu) 01:05

my only critique is that she's not in my bedroom.