what kind of genre/themes are u going for?

>>147324
erotic nonsense

>>147329
what i need is suggestions for erotic situations

Write a story about >>147321 and >>147323 - a dysfunctional, abusive, femdom x maledom couple who are in an ever-escalating power struggle with each other to be the most dominant one in the relationship!

Bonus points if it ends with one of them being permanently paralyzed/brain-damaged while the other smugly pushes them around in a wheelchair

>what i need is suggestions for erotic situations
8 girls sucking 1 PENIS at once. If he can't hold it in for a certain amount of times he gets a mop shoved up his ANUS

Here's a scenario that came to me during a dream:



This story is supposed to be the beginning of an erotic tale of the life of Jesus Christ, during which he has sex with his mom as a shota (the same age as his father when he got Mary pregnant) and later has a life of a hippie cult leader (but like a cool cult leader like John Lennon, not like Charles Manson) that implies lots of sex.

Feel free to adapt that into a story if you feel like it.

Lots of unserious replies.. as a matter of fact, I've probably wrote 10 or so novel length fiction books, either science fiction, though no one has ever seen them besides myself

>Lots of unserious replies..
Mine was 100% serious!

>>147320
honestly like, we don't have enough to go off of though
who are the characters, what are they like
what are your fetishes - if you're writing smut, you absolutely need to write something that you want to read

https://up.heyuri.net/src/3900.pdf
this is the only erotic story I've released to the public and I am reminded that I really should finish volume 3 ( ´ω`)
(part 3 is mostly done, but some scenes have like one or two lines so I need to actually expand on them)
and I probably do need to give parts 1+2 an editing pass lol, I noticed a few really dumb errors re-reading it

my story is basically about a loser who manages to improve his life through the bonds of sex (with like, a Plusle and Minun), exploring themes of codependency (maybe not in a healthy way but I never do really present these relationships as particularly healthy) and someone sticking their big human cock in a creature that is only a few times bigger than said cock lol
there are also psychic twins that show up and it is a not-quite-open secret that they're fucking - several of the other gym leaders do know and don't want to derail their extremely promising career, but they also don't approve in the slightest of what is happening

so, what do you want to explore in your work, whether in terms of outright plot or in terms of sexual situations

have you tried finding an eromanga with a goofy plot that was interesting and just like, started writing from there?
just keep writing the situation with your own characters in them

>>147347
continuing from this, what non-ero parts do you want in your story, if any?
what is the setting?

I ended up spending a lot of time on the fact that my MC is a Pokemon Trainer doing the Gym challenge (I did gloss over most of the actual fights), but they were connective tissue to ground the story into a whole, versus the story being entirely the MC going "I was pretty sure I was about to tear Minun in half, but the concept of understanding cause and effect was completely beyond me as I entered her. I drank Plusle's drool as my fingers danced inside of the red-and-yellow electric rodent." etc etc repeated like 10 times with minor variation.

fully free-standing chapters does make this harder, although you could make any situations the characters get into more episodic
kind of like how you don't actually need to watch hundreds of episodes of Star Trek TNG to enjoy an episode

how many characters do you have? more makes things a little easier when it comes to variety

>>147332
>Write a story about >>147321 and >>147323 - a dysfunctional, abusive, femdom x maledom couple who are in an ever-escalating power struggle with each other to be the most dominant one in the relationship!
that is a remarkably good idea
I sure couldn't do shit with it (I wouldn't go as far as the last part of the post either), but it is totally worth pursuing

>>147332
Seconding this idea, this is a really good one. But I have no writing skills myself, so I don't think I could pull it off.

But I can't help but wonder anyway; should it be somewhat dark comedy about a cycle of abuse, or played more serious for drama/thriller?

This thread is kinda inspiring me to start writing. I wanted to give it a try for a while now. Maybe I'll finally type out something, now that it's summer break...(´～`)

No one cares about fiction books. Nowadays any AI model can write one.

Write a non-fiction book instead. Maybe a biography or a deep research on a certain subject. Dig the undigitized archives, visit antique shops and flee markets to find obscure rare old-ass newspapers as your sources, make an effort to find people for the interviews, etc. That's the only thing that AI can't do (yet).

I want to write a story about an adult man who gets killed by a 13 year old girl for mutual sexual pleasure. It would not only follow their interactions, but the fallout, the criminal charges and the media and public's reaction. This premise is inspired by my experiences, as I've met many underage girls who have extreme fetishes. Things you can't even imagine in some cases. So I know that out there somewhere is a girl that age who would like to asphyxiate me, or hang me upside down and slit my throat so that I bleed out like an animal.

Society believes little girls to be innocent, but they are anything but. Many even say that man-girl intercourse is just as bad as murder, because they believe (most often unconsciously) that a girl's worth is tied to her purity and virginity. The goal of this story is to challenge these assumptions.

I've written one paragraph so far. I've only ever finished a single short story in my whole life and it probably wasn't very good, so I'll probably never bring this idea to fruition. So if anyone wants to take my idea, go ahead.

>>147370
go for it!
even if you don't release anything, writing itself is fun as an activity

although I will admit that it does feel even better to get something into a state where you are comfortable with other people seeing it

I've been thinking about a cool concept about an immortal hired gun working for the devil, where he gets assigned horrible tasks to fulfill based on their clients. These clients happen to be highly depraved, societally outcast, or plain old evil. Some of the topics I'd like to cover involve cannibalism, feederism, the classic "pedo", human trafficking+mindbreak, child soldiers etc.

The catch is the guy is more or less unemotional and doesn't particularly react or care about things he does(in fact an interesting choice is to have him be mute). The more interesting thing is how he goes to achieve the tasks the clients request of him, and how society reacts to his actions, along with the direct conflict between individual clients and whatever authority is dispatched to handle the issue. In a way, the clients and the police/SJWs/whatevers that oppose them are the ones where you build a backstory and character arc.



You can have the guy work for clients with highly erotic tastes, painting a degenerate scene where they do whatever, and talk about how they want the guy to help them do something illegal or something. If I wrote it I would add additional scenea of violence and brutality, but that might be what you want. One interesting thing is to choose whether the guy suceeds or fails in his tasks, and how that changes the client's further motivations and actions, along with how others react. Also you can draft up new characters each chapter, focusing on them as "contracts" with different clients across the country.

Does this interest you OP?

everything in this thread sucks

>>147392
I'd read this manga.

I've been reading a bit about writing in the 19th Century and one thing that struck me is how derivative it was. As you know people at that time had major respect (though starting to decline) for the Old Masters and part of your learning was to copy from their work very directly so you could pick up the right techniques. This applied to writing also. For example Oscar Wilde's writing was known by his contemporaries to be heavily influenced by French modernists and certain English forbears--to the point of being accused of plagiarism. For example his book 'Portrait of Dorian Gray is based of a french novel with a similar theme called 'Au Rebours';

"The publication of The Picture of Dorian Gray in 1891 revealed the main influence quite definitely, for, apart from the fact that Wilde's novel
bears many obvious echoes of the most remarkable of French
decadent novels, the A Rebours of J. K. Huysmans, which
Arthur Symons has called " the breviary of the decadence,"
it contains the following passage which, although A Rebours
is not named, is generally understood to refer to that book,
even if the fact were not otherwise obvious
:
—
"His eyes fell on the yellow book that Lord Henry had
sent him. What was it, he wondered. He went towards
the little pearl-coloured octagonal stand, that had always
looked to him like the work of some strange Egyptian bees
that wrought in silver, and taking up the volume, flung himself into an arm-chair, and began to turn over the leaves.
After a few minutes he became absorbed.
" It was the strangest book he had ever read. It seemed
to him that in exquisite raiment, and to the delicate sound
of flutes, the sins of the world were passing in dumb show
before him. Things that he had dimly dreamed of were
suddenly made real to him. Things of which he had never
dreamed were gradually revealed.

This book so revealed Dorian Gray to himself that he became frankly the Due Jean des Esseintes of English literature. There are differences, to be sure, and the sensations
and ideas of Dorian Gray are not elaborated so scientifically as those of des Esseintes, but there is something
more than coincidence in the resemblance of their attitudes
towards life."

However Oscar Wilde copied with a difference. He was called the 'master of paradox', so when he copied he turned things on their heads, he perverted them, he made them funny--its like when artists copy a pose and change the arrangement of limbs so it ends up different--this is perfectly valid.

"In the essays collected in the book called Intentions,
Oscar Wilde has let us into the secret which produced these
works. That secret is an attempt to push Gautier's idea
of art for art's sake, and Whistler's idea of art as Nature's
exemplar, to their logical conclusions. He outdoes his
masters with the obvious intention of going one better."

>>147344
u say charles isnt cool but did YOU have SEX with this qt? heh, tought so.