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No.22497
what can be improved in this drawing of my wife? something feels off to me
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No.22500
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Hi!
I decided to contribute to your draw thread with a red-line to help you out a little. I'm not an expert tho (´人｀)

I kept the head side the same size.
Adjusted the pose to be more natural.
Shortened the legs, made the hands more proportional
adjusted eyes, thickness of torso, curves

things to keep in mind:
1. just because lolis are small, doesnt mean they have tiny hands relative to their own body, their hands and feet are normal proportion compared to the rest of them. They just seem small to you because youre a big person! ヽ(´∇`)ノ

2. Lolis have tummy curves! Even muscular ones! Lolis can be curvy just in different ways that adults! Keep that in mind when drawing child characters. If you draw adult hips and abs on a loli it tends to just look off. （⌒∇⌒ゞ） I made her flat and younger because thats teh awesome! LOL
when you draw stuff like arms and legs dialing down the definition helps make them look more moe but also younger in general, you can see this with many other artists.
Making appealing characters is a balancing act between including realistic anatomy for sexy purposes and also simplifying, this stuff takes years to perfect, its something everyone is always workin' on (;´Д`)
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No.22501
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>>22500
thanks for the advice anon, I tend to not be too realistic when drawing lolis because i like it when the area between the hips and torso has that tasteful curve, although I realize the hips in my op are way too narrow among other wrong things

what about this drawing?
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No.22502
>>22501
that is a cute neko loli
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No.22624
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This is my OC her name is Superia Star-Butterfly Rainbow-field, this drawing is copywrited so do not steal my intellectual property!! ヽ(`Д´ )ノ if you do, ill be really mad!
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No.22626
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I maed this! biggrin
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No.22627
What da fuuuuuuuggggg!!?!?!? ヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノヽ(`Д´)ノ
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No.22628
>>22626
HoW COULD YOU DO THISS!!??!! angry AAAAA!!! I'LL SUE!!!
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No.22629
>>22624
beautifur（⌒∇⌒ゞ）
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No.22630
>>22628
w-what did i do? sad
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No.22631
>>22630
Nothing 💗nyaoo-closedeyes
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No.22632
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handmaed mspaint little girl
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No.22633
>>22632
shes beautiful! love
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No.22663
>>22624
>>22626
so cute 😳... ah- i mean, cute but not as cute as my wife 😉
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No.22664
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is this better?
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No.22665
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>>22632
>>22633
I drew her again ＼(＾.＾)／
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No.22667
>>22665
truly a goddess
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No.22669
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I
love
my
wife
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No.22693
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I drew her again
>>22664
this times the legs are too small (I think)
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No.22704
>>22693
she's the sole survivor of the evangelion thingy, add the evangelion thingy to make it canon
>legs are too small
that's it, im abandoning art forever, i will be packing my things and moving to anti-art land
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