This feels really sad no longer posting on /f/Here is a new song in the worksrip /f/I hope you like this and I will be checking back for feedback please leave someThank you
>>2071Still making bangers, I see. But honestly, it was kinda of expect for it happen, I mean you were one of the only ones who was making new OC, but at least you haven't given up on making musics discolad, that would have been 100 times much more sadder.
>>2073Thank you anon I appreciate thatI will continue to make music and flash for you and many others
catchy tunei liek songs with lyrical dissonance ヽ(´ー｀)ノ
>>2071heyy. you're here too it seems.i was surpised when i found out that discophrenia 2 wasn't some old classic flash but instead was pretty new when i first lurked /f/. anyway, that one was pretty catchy.
>>2071Absolute banger of a song, discolad!I look for to it final release.
>>2085>>2101thx guys :thumbsup:
>>2075when I told my friend this, he was less bothered by the contrast, happy song, dark theme. He then thought it was brilliant idk.But I chose your words when telling him; "lyrical disonnance"
Wonder who made all those critiques you're quoting...
Do people here only use greentexting as direct quotes? I have a lost to learn lol
>Do people here only use greentexting as direct quotes?yes, it's in the rules and thus causes confusion when quoting feature is misused - I thought you were quoting the song's lyrics
>>2113sorry about thathow do people usually do bullet points here?
I suppose u can use any other symbol* A point- Another point, I often use this one• Yet another point+ Are we still going?・This is Japanese● as all these geometric ones: 「○」「◆」「◇」「■」「□」※ Also Nihongo, this is better for footnotes (though nevar seen someone using here...)
Cool thanks. It will take me some time to unlearn my old habits so thanks for your patients>>2071*Try doing accents so you can get a feel for the control you have over your mouth.--Imagine you are going to sneeze and start talking. I think I sound like Steven Toast, watch the first episode it is GREAT.--Imagine you are YAWNING and start talking. I sound like a British stereotype when I do that.--Imagine you are your favorite TV personality, I see myself as Will Sasso doing his Jesse Ventura impersonation*Add a pause and start button so we can better review and enjoy your work. Right clicking Play just doesn't feel right to me. Love the track bar.*Don't live your by women. Cracks in the windshield only grow into more cracks unless fixed.*Try making the "I Don't Feel the Same" part higher and more optimistic. *I think you are confusing the pitch in your voice with the force with how you say your words, try talking in your falsetto, like a girl, and playing with your pitch that way.*Stop thinking so much about public interactions, it is literally a waste of energy that is only being invested in destroying yourself. It's the whole "Be Yourself" thing people talk about. Talk without consequence and you will autocorrect yourself, the right people will forgive.*Your ending sounds like a lead into another verse. Is that why it is a demo?*Try turning "count my lovers on a single hand" to "count my lovers on one hand" See how that feels*Love the cassette feel it immediately reminded me of *https://youtu.be/UdD1LQs5Xak*Always remove the source ID when posting Youtube videos. --Eg. https://youtu.be/UdD1LQs5Xak ""?si=7SzrTKlvfN0WyuAJ""---I removed the quoted part.*Can you make the cassette start and stop spinning at the beginning and end of the video?--Can you make the spinning overlap and inverse to make it show that it is getting near the end?I am beyond happy to see you again! I had this irrational fear that with /f/ gone that the future of your videos were gone too.Sorry for all the critiques. I don't get to share what I know/opinions often enough. Maybe one day I will be able.
>>2117Anon I love the critiques thank you. I will try these tips when I sing again; I masked the audio so I dont really sound like that (i.e. Garfield Lorenzo music), I sound more like this here:>>1515Sometimes I try to go to bed after a cigarette and napthen I wake up with a really raspy voiceI might just settle for lemon and hotwater next time because smoking is really rough.While I agree with most points and will try to sing falsetto;>*Add a pause and start button so we can better review and enjoy your workYou can double click the screen to pause and replay. I added these cuz I felt they were neededAgain thank you youre feedback is appreciated.
>>2114I think it would be easiest just the reverse the quote symbol for imaginary quotes<like this
>just the reverse the quote symbol<this is historically the "reply" symbol, but is seldom usedit's not like Heyuri has a "thou shalt not" list besides what's listed on rules, but using any other symbol also takes pressing one buttan on keyboard
>"Greentext stories" or any misuse of the quoting feature.idk that kinda tells me that what I did could have gotten me banned if anyone cared to report it.>pressing one buttan on keyboardbuttons that are farther away and don't feel naturalAnd though I prefer greentexting points I also don't want people to feel like there are strangers lurking here that are unwilling to change their ways to fit in.
>>2071 go for a different base and drums as your time signature. you are turning into /f/icklback
>>2137I'm not as fussed about that (tempo,drums and bass similar to prior songs) at the moment, cuz I didnt think enough people cared, I'll try to change it up in the future though. Someone else mentioned this too, so I hear you.
>>2137Like if you want someone who sounds the same and really didn't care about it, try listening to Chuck Berry's guitar intros. I think there's enough variation in my songs that they don't all sound like they can slide into a version of "Someday" and come out sounding similar, because I haven't made videos for all of them. And what if I do? I'm just making tunes for myself.