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>>147320
honestly like, we don't have enough to go off of though
who are the characters, what are they like
what are your fetishes - if you're writing smut, you absolutely need to write something that you want to read
https://up.heyuri.net/src/3900.pdf
this is the only erotic story I've released to the public and I am reminded that I really should finish volume 3
( ´ω`)
(part 3 is mostly done, but some scenes have like one or two lines so I need to actually expand on them)
and I probably do need to give parts 1+2 an editing pass lol, I noticed a few really dumb errors re-reading it
my story is basically about a loser who manages to improve his life through the bonds of sex (with like, a Plusle and Minun), exploring themes of codependency (maybe not in a healthy way but I never do really present these relationships as particularly healthy) and someone sticking their big human cock in a creature that is only a few times bigger than said cock lol
there are also psychic twins that show up and it is a not-quite-open secret that they're fucking - several of the other gym leaders do know and don't want to derail their extremely promising career, but they also don't approve in the slightest of what is happening
so, what do you want to explore in your work, whether in terms of outright plot or in terms of sexual situations
have you tried finding an eromanga with a goofy plot that was interesting and just like, started writing from there?
just keep writing the situation with your own characters in them
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