>>144496
Um, thanks.

>>144502
>Was your crush cryogenically frozen for 500 years?
Well you know, every girl wants to be a Disney princess... Originally I had written it in modern English but the archaic style fit better with words like "lilted" and "wanton".

>Maketh
In the first line it refers to a singular person though, so even if referring to plural qualities, it's still correct. But you are right about the second one. Here's a revised version.

Thy lilted voice and hair of flax
Maketh mine heart to melt like wax
Thy skin so soft and white like cream
Maketh me think you're of a dream
Thine wanton joy's a work of art
I am your martyr; pierced of heart
And please don't fear, I'm watching, near
But lay a hand, I won't, my dear

I am grateful for all the feedback. Who knew Heyuri would make such a great wingman?

>>144512
I looked up the laws of my country. Yes I could be arrested and put in jail before[i/] my trial, but to be convicted the prosecution would need to prove beyond reasonable doubt that I had a criminal Mens rea. That is impossible in this circumstance, especially given the last line of the poem.

I might get some dirty looks from people, but I can't be put on the registry for it. Still I have to think whether or not I should send it, not because of the trouble it might cause me but just because I don't want to frighten the girl. I think she'll like it, though... I really do wanna make her blush and put a big smile on her face.