What do you guys think of my love poem? If you received this with a flower, what would you think? I'm not sure if I'm going to give it to them or not. Also I might work on it some more, so any critique would be appreciated.

To my little sunbeam.

Thy lilted voice and hair of flax
Maketh mine heart to melt like wax
Thy skin so soft and white like cream
Make me to think thou art a dream
Thine wanton joy's a work of art
I am your martyr; pierced by heart
Please don't fear, I'm watching, near
But shall never touch you, dear!

With love,
Your secret admirer.