MY SUPER IMPORTANT CRITIQUE WHICH IS VERY SUPER IMPORTANT:

Contrary to the post above, I like the bold pen used for the outline, but the inconsistent weight used on places like the hand and the elbow are what throw me off. Using a consistent weight on the entire outline will make it come together nicely. I like bold outlines used on characters, but that is my personal preference. ヽ(´ー｀)ノ