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ahem, as the guy who liked the concept so much that I ended up drawing nearly all of the characters + a couple short comics I am fairly certain the names of the loli generals were as follows:

Charlotte: the strongest general and lolifield's right hand (wo)man, can turn into a bat or a swarm of bats, can't remember
Cyrene (cute!): the mermaid girl with a big tooth who can shoot water from her mouth at very high speeds, enough to level an entire city! and btw she is my favourite character. Maybe i misread her name this whole time
Sabrina: the magician girl whom is my second favourite character and I imagine her as an evil scatterbrained girl who likes (evil) fun
Anomalee: the anomalous and mysterious entity shaped like a loli who can make objects near her do impossible things
Godiva Johnson: musician loli, she hates her name
Erika Von Braun: loli general I invented, she's very weak and sleepy but if she falls asleep she becomes strong, I hate her god why did i give her such a stupid name

unfortunately my memory cannot help me any further, there are at least 2 more generals whose name i cannot recall:

- cow-onesie general of whom I can only remember the cow onesie (i even have a file called cow_onesie_general which i never drew because i forgot T_T)
- failed general who isn't even a loli (part of the reason she is a failed general???) but a 40-something year old woman who wishes to go back to being a loli, she's dressed like a madoka magica character and talks to a teddy bear

I truly enjoyed those threads and I am highly disappointed in heyuri for not giving the dove girl saga the appreciation it deserves! ヽ(`Д´)ノ
There were many different concepts for dovegirl's past and the story overall and I believe if a skilled mangaka were to draw and flesh out the story a bit more it could have HUGE success (I am dead serious)

I would write down my own version of the story but this post is already long enough

Last but not least I would like to thank OP for dreaming up such interesting characters and story ヽ(´ー`)ノ
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